Original music, help me pick a song?

youngryan216

Glock1975

Sounds awesome bro. I like #1 the best.

Rain

#1. I just want to herf and have you sing to me.

youngryan216

Rain:

#1. I just want to herf and have you sing to me.

Not sure how to take that. . .j/k thank you Rain! I'll send you an album when it's done brah.

jgibv

youngryan216

smoke em if you got em

Both songs are great Ryan...you got skillz my man! I'm going to pick # 1. Keep up the great work.

jgibv

kuzi16

danielzreyes

We need a #3 or #4 ... or even #5

SM0K3Y

DUDE DUDE DUDE!!!!!! NICE! Nicely done yo, pesonally I like The Cleaner, BUT Right Side is the pick fo sho, good hook, good song name, chicks gonna eat that up Great voice too btw

Poopy Jones

Both are excellent. I liked the second one better

SleevePlz

Since this is for a singer/songwriter contest, the second song is better. It shows off your vocals much better. The first song may be a better overall song, but lyrically the second one wins. My wife may or may not have contributed to this opinion. She also said that you remind her of Damien Rice. Also, the cafe around the corner from us has openings to play. Feel free to come gig up here some time!

Martel

both great. go with 2 for the contest.

Hays

Man, first of all whenever you produce a record I wanna hear about it, I can listen to this all day! I think some guys here make a solid point in that ¨The Right Side¨specifically showcases your voice better, but overall I think ¨The Cleaner¨ is a much more polished, sophisticated arrangement; up to you which fits this particular contest the best, but #1 is the winner in my book.

CharlieHeis

Wow. Awesome job. #1 gets my vote.

youngryan216

blutattoo

Number 2 showcases more of what ya got, but 1 had me want to bump it in my car. Both are great so I don't think you can go wrong either way. You got a gift my man. I'm subscribed to your youtube channel so I can't wait for more.

avengethis

I could listen to this stuff all day long.

kaspera79

WOW !! You should already be a signed artist. In a contest, I would say #1 drew me in and I really "felt" it more. The added strings are what did it for me. Dude, I would buy your music, and make other people listen to it.. Great job. By the way, while I was listening to it my daughter asked, " Who's that ?" I asked her to guess she said... Ray Lamontagne, Ryan Adams, just tell me. Put out that CD and I'll buy two. You don't need luck in this one, you have some major talent. (edit from here) I just played these again for my wife and two daughters and they all said #2 Right Side...You may be right, Right Side has a female appeal

Eulogy

Wow, amazing stuff. It had to be a difficult decision either way, both songs are amazing. I'm rooting for you to win.

letsgowithbob

Man, those are both really great songs. I enjoyed listening to them both. You are very talented, I like #2 for the contest, I think you picked well.

Bob Luken

So sorry I didn't weigh in early enough but I love 'em both. Can you post the lyrics to both of these? I think I heard you singing about smoking cigars? Right?

youngryan216

SM0K3Y

Nice!